But you can only go to Partner before having to end and buy the game... If you're going to put games you have to buy on Newgrounds. At least put something somewhere in the description about how short it is.

Overall it was a good game though, needs a few added extra like a zoom feature and a button to make the game faster.

Other than that, not bad.

This was amazing.

It's not often that you come across a flash with a meaning behind it, and it is even more rare that I feel compelled to review a flash. This flash has done both.

It conveys a wonderful message; That no matter how big or small. Some things can really affect how you feel, and live your life, or end your life.

The quality is fantastic, and the little details are even better.

But the fact that this was done with a mouse, and in five weeks is just incredible.
If you can get your hands on a tablet you'll go far!

Awesome job! 5/5!

I kept losing due to intense lag.

Great game, just great. I got pretty far, but I kept losing due to lag!

Work on that!

That sweeping is absolutely ridiculous!

I'm just starting to master five and six string sweeps, but not like you, yours are just absolutely insane and they're so precise.

You need to start doing videos of you playing so I can actually grasp the insanity that is Metaljonus.

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I have listened to hundreds of songs, maybe thousands in my life, some have made a bigger impact than others. There are some that you can really connect with and experience, and others that are just alright for bobbing your head and enjoying.
For me though, this track provides true sonic bliss, for seven minutes, thirty-eight seconds you achieve what every trance producer is attempting to do, you have me entranced, entirely entranced.

For the first minute and thirty seconds, it's just another trance track, it makes you bob your head and move with the beat. However, at around 1:35, it becomes a whole new experience it grabs a hold of you, it breathes you in and just holds you and starting at two minutes, thirteen seconds it breathes you out. And every positive memory, every single moment that has ever brought out a smile is produced in the mind and the body. And from then on there is a full body connection with the music, the soul becomes one with the melody and the beat, there is no other feeling but intense from that point on and at six minutes thirty-three seconds it only gets more powerful.

In my own humble opinion, you have created one of the most beautiful and captivating trance tracks I have ever heard, and I thank you for that.

I understand you've probably not been playing guitar for too long, I only say that because of the lack of dynamics and fluidity in your playing.

But, first off, your tone needs some serious work, your sound is much more bluesy than metal. First thing you need to work on is getting some more gain in there to take up some of that space that you leave hangin' around.

Second, some reverb and delay and just a touch of chorus would really help out your solo's tone. A hall reverb at 3.6ms and a delay at 400ms would do you a lot of good and the little bit of chorus will really tie your notes together.

Third, your rhythm guitar needs some serious work. It's boring, it's the same thing over and over and over, when you came in with the tremolo picking it wasn't bad but you still had the same two notes over and over.

You solo really isn't bad, but you have too many rests and in a few spots you went sharp or you went flat and it really hurt you. I think what's really hurting you is the rhythm guitar, it's just too bland and boring.

If you were a bit more specific with your rig I could give you a lot more help.
What kind of amp are you using? Any pedals? What kind of guitar? What kind of pickups? How do you record? Etcetera.

It's really not horrible, you just need some work with your tone and structure.